GhostPepperNG's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Practise February 24 23]

I really like this one! It sounds like the music that would play during a jungle themed dream sequence or when you were reading a witty letter. I think the melody could use a bit more fine tuning, when all the instruments cut each other off it makes the melody weird to follow, maybe you could have the xylophone be the base melody and the other instruments be the supporting melody; so the xylophone would play throughout the song with the only cut offs being in between the rest notes.

[Practise Feb 18 2023]

I think there's a bit too much piano, maybe limit it to just the melody? And I think for the bass piano it's really fast and kind of distracting, maybe replace it with a synth and extend the notes a bit. It's also pretty repetitive, maybe a key change would make it sound a little less flat! Besides that good job consistently practicing!

Sony-Shock responds:

Thank you very much, it really helps a lot for someone to have it spelled out like that 🥺

[FUCK THAT]

This is really good! But I wish I could hear the lyrics a bit more.